Kindly if you make out spelling, grammatical or rhyming mistake from this poem?

Dont listen to the haters! I love it. The words speak out to me and they connect with me.Your doing a grat job. One peice of constructive critism that I would like to say is try to organize the words a little more. Some were out of place and it made the line not make sense(only 2 lines) Other than that, Its fantastic